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Spinning, Spinning, Spinning.
That's all we do is Spin
As we wait for all the pleasure moments to begin.

Looking, Looking, Looking.
Trying to focus
On the Chaos before us
As we run into walls
As we lose our balance
And yet...
We continue

Spinning, Spinning, Spinning,
Wondering who is winning.
"Are we really in control," she asks,
"Or are we just beginning?"
And so we continue to Spin and Look and Grieve
For the life we wish we had
As the little boy across the street
Wishes for a dad,
But that is all we do right now
Is Wish and Wish and Wish,
And sing a little song.


Is that really so wrong?


To wish and breathe and spin,
Looking for the answers
As we struggle just to swim,
As we struggle just to understand:
Why did death take him?
©2007-2009 ~Audio4Ever
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Author's Comments

mmm this came out while listening to Azure Ray. Death is a foreign thing to us, how do we deal to it? I havn't experienced a loss of someone close, ever, but I came close when a friend got in a car crash. it made me think. Comment?

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Mm... I like this, but some of the parts don't seem to fit very well. Whereas the first parts seem to make on think about how we kind of wish for everything we don't have, rather than being happy with what we do have, or doing something about it, the second part starts mentioning death, and why's..
It just doesn't seem to fit very well, it seems like two different parts.

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I :heart: Azure Ray. And I really like this poem.

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Peace in the world or the whole world in pieces. :pride:

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